From 83bbbe7ae2e23017bd8708a9ee6ff46f135bf6bd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Astro <astro@spaceboyz.net>
Date: Wed, 9 Aug 2023 00:07:50 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] gatherer/templates: reword, fix

---
 gatherer/templates/token_donate.html | 10 +++++-----
 gatherer/templates/token_thanks.html |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gatherer/templates/token_donate.html b/gatherer/templates/token_donate.html
index 065f8e4..bc8887d 100644
--- a/gatherer/templates/token_donate.html
+++ b/gatherer/templates/token_donate.html
@@ -26,23 +26,23 @@
 
         <h2>Reason</h2>
         <p>
-          A token lets us access <a href="https://docs.joinmastodon.org/methods/streaming/#public">the public timeline streaming API</a> of your instance so that we can include it in our sampling of the Fediverse.
+          A token lets us connect to the <a href="https://docs.joinmastodon.org/methods/streaming/#public">the public timeline streaming API</a> of your instance so that we can include it in our sampling of the Fediverse.
         </p>
 
         <h2>Background</h2>
         <p>
-          Mastodon is <a href="https://github.com/mastodon/mastodon/pull/23989#issuecomment-1628961709">breaking unauthenticated access</a> in future versions. That really sucks for <a href="https://fedi.buzz">#FediBuzz</a> and the <a href="https://relay.fedi.buzz">#FediBuzz Relay</a>.
+          Mastodon v4.2.0 <a href="https://github.com/mastodon/mastodon/pull/23989#issuecomment-1628961709">breaks unauthenticated access</a> in future versions. That really sucks for <a href="https://fedi.buzz">#FediBuzz</a> and the <a href="https://relay.fedi.buzz">#FediBuzz Relay</a>.
         </p>
 
-        <h2>What about my privacy?</h2>
+        <h2>Your privacy?</h2>
         <p>
-          We consume only the <em>public</em> timeline. There are neither boosts nor replies inside, and of course no private messages ever.
+          We consume only the <em>public</em> timeline. We don't even see boosts or replies. The permissions that we request won't allow us to do anything else.
         </p>
         <p>
           #FediBuzz gets at less data than what the Web crawlers can see. Of course, we respect the Internet standard <em>robots.txt</em>.
         </p>
         <p>
-          Despite taking these precautions, we still do not recommend using ActivityPub for private messaging. It is made for publishing, after all. We recommend XMPP with <a href="https://omemo.top/">OMEMO</a>.
+          Despite taking these precautions, we still do not recommend using ActivityPub for sensitive communications. After all, it is made for publishing. For private messaging we personlly recommend <a href="https://omemo.top/">XMPP with OMEMO</a>.
         </p>
       </main>
 
diff --git a/gatherer/templates/token_thanks.html b/gatherer/templates/token_thanks.html
index e14e06a..a540a59 100644
--- a/gatherer/templates/token_thanks.html
+++ b/gatherer/templates/token_thanks.html
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
     <main>
       <div class="plain">
-        <form method="post">
+        <form method="post" action="/token/donate">
           <fieldset>
             <legend>Donate a token for another instance?</legend>
             <input name="instance" size="40">